My dangerous journey to school
Hi, you're probably wondering where crazy but this is what we have to do to get to school each day. So let me tell you the things we have to do to get to school.
Every time I go I always get this feeling in my gut that we might die but my sister knows that where going to make it.So as we go onto the raft we have to prepare everything so it doesn't brake. Then we seat out into the river. “What's that” my sister says I think it's a crocodile “what should we do” we should slowly paddle downstream so the crocodile doesn’t follow us “good idea”.
When where just about to get there my sister spots another thing in the water It’s a group of piranhas “where so close” I know but we have to somehow distract them “oh I have a idea we should grab a brunch off a tree and throw it downstream so they go for the brunch”. Great idea, it worked we made it.
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ReplyDeleteHi Riley. Great work I love it. I love the way you imagined how they got to school. Try put in some more details. Looks like you put in some details. How long did the story take?
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